You are reflecting today. You already researched a job role and banked notes. Now you hold that role beside your personal statement and ask a blunt question: does the person on the page look like someone who could do this work?
Open two files if you have them: your ALT 1 personal statement (Strand 1.1) and your job-role research notes. If those research notes are missing, use the sample role on the case step (Retail Sales Assistant) so you still finish PS to Job Role today. Fit is not flattery. A mismatch is useful. It either means the role is wrong for you right now, or the statement has fallen behind who you are.
Three ideas you will use for the rest of the period:
| Term | What it means for you | Real example |
|---|---|---|
| Fit | You will judge your own statement against one real role, not against a vague career dream. | Teamwork evidence matching a care-assistant role that names calm communication under pressure |
| Personal statement revisit | Today is the first scheduled return to ALT 1; later lessons will return again with workplace and community lenses. | Adding one placement sentence after work experience because the old draft never mentioned it |
| Role alignment | You will name three aligned aspects and any claim the role cannot use. | Café closing-shift responsibility aligning with a retail advert that asks for lock-up trust |
Before you open your own files, work through five common claims about personal statements and job-role fit. For each beat, decide true or false from instinct before you read the explanation. You will test these instincts against Aoife’s map, then your own files, so honesty beats guessing the “right” school answer.
Study Aoife’s map in the worked example. She holds her personal-statement claims beside a role she researched from CareersPortal reading and clinic-style job notes: Occupational Therapy Assistant support work in a community primary-care team. Watch how she picks three aligned aspects, names one dead claim, and decides what to revise.
If you have no job-role research notes, map your own statement today against this fallback role instead:
Fallback role: Retail Sales Assistant (high-street store)
Your turn in the portfolio: open or create PS to Job Role (Strand 1.2). Name your job role (researched or the Retail Sales Assistant fallback), and start listing three statement aspects with the role demand each supports. You will finish the note after the annotate practice.
Practise the labelling move on a sample before you finish your own portfolio note. Tag each marked phrase as aligned to the role, neutral (true but not useful here), or mismatch (does not help this role). When the model annotation is revealed, note where you differed. Spend about eight minutes on the sample.
Then use the rest of this step for your own work. Finish PS to Job Role (Strand 1.2): half a page that names your role, three aligned aspects with the role demand each supports, any mismatch or dead claim you will cut or rewrite, and the exact change you will make in your ALT 1 personal-statement file (or “no change” with a one-line reason). Open the live ALT 1 file and make that edit now if you can; if the period is tight, record the intended edit in PS to Job Role and complete the file change before the next lesson. This is your first scheduled personal-statement revisit.
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