Open {{code:03_proposal_draft}} in your {{code:03_documents}} folder. Find one sentence that is vague or too long. That is the first sentence you will rewrite.
If a file is missing, tell your teacher now.
Your teacher checks each document for five things.
Before: "This project is something I kind of want to do because it would be good for the community and stuff."
After: "This community clean-up day will give local volunteers a clear three-hour plan."
Now you will improve your proposal. Follow the steps in the box below and tick each one. You'll do the letter in the next task.
One good rewrite and one layout fix count for more than a new font.
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