Think of the last long message you skipped because it looked heavy. Would three short bullets have made you read it?
A bullet list is for equal items, where the order doesn't matter.
A numbered list is for steps that must happen in order.
A sub-bullet is one detail tucked in under a main point.
Too many bullets make a proposal look like rough notes, so keep your story in normal paragraphs.
Blank tees, vinyl and heat-press access are equal items, so they go in bullets. Design the logo, test-print, photograph, post and take orders is a sequence, so it gets numbers.
You will make a practice document and turn two short paragraphs into a bullet list and a numbered list. Follow the steps in the box below. Copy the practice text from here, and use the finished lists to check your work.
Materials paragraph: I need a folding table, a cash box, printed price cards, three sample products, a phone for Tap to Pay, and a simple sign.
Sequence paragraph: Confirm the stall date, pack the kit the night before, set up 30 minutes early, photograph the display, then pack down and count the cash.
Sub-point: Send a short email if I have not had a reply in three days.
Finished kit list:
Finished sequence:
Work in {{code:03_proposal_draft}} only.
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